Freewriting
10/9: SAT Writing Prep Topic
“Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
Everybody has some choice. People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are. I don't believe in circumstances. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want and, if they can't find them, make them.
~ Adapted from: George Bernard Shaw, Mrs. Warren's Profession
Do success and happiness depend on the choices people make rather than on factors beyond their control? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.”
Original:
Yes, the choices of an individual dictates his or her circumstance countless evidence in the generic pool of dating and flirtationship can prove this. Men and women have often chosen to be in a circumstance of happiness, sadness or even mixed In relationships, investments, hobbies. Happiness either found from partners, inner concious or outer influences is not solely dictated on the circumstances but becoming the circumstance then and there.
The Relationships of today, are seen as either monogamous or losing a best friend. The circumstance people place themselves in is not entirely chance, but the decision they have made. When dating typically couples will find a way to make the circumstances happy, but it is always followed before a mixed signal, saddening corcumstance however small it may be.
Peoples happiness are dependent on their partner and that is a circumstance itself.
In Investment rather stocks and bonds with money people are relying possibly on intuition of their guts, or an even more radical conclusion of outer forces giving hints and suggestions on what to buy, sell and trade. Regular people that are not apart of the moving Wall Street stock exchange can agree that the first thing that comes into mind is a sad business attired man who has lost his money or a rich business attired man who has made some profit. The circumstances by chance, but not happiness as happiness and its state of being is not derived from the circumstance but in ones inner self to find closure in what they are doing, Justification wether it is correct or not, is the attribution to the circumstance.
Hobbies are clearly what a person likes to do in his or her past time. Jobs can vary from individual to individual but in a general census it is what a person does to get money. These hobbies and duties we pursue are circumstances that we enter with a credible amount of happiness as usually dopemine is released in doing your favorite things.
In conclusion, from relationships to investments and hobbies or jobs the information presented shows that happiness and success are based in the peoples pursuit for it as well as keeping a positively growing mindset. Keeping optimistic and supportive of any situation and circumestance that a person is stuck in.
Formalized:
No man is bound by law, nature or truth, it is all an illusion. Success and happiness depend on the choices people make with the positive growth mindset to encompass action. A drive for success, no matter the horse power with preseverance will eventually be rewarded. The dime, the knickel and the penny with enough work will and can make a dollar. But is it fair? No, the real question to ask is if it is possible for two cars of different classes to race in a circuit unknown to them with the lower class car winning? Success is an ambitious word, something Investers want to hear, a word that will gain the clicks of social media and will cover text books, written history with immortality in your name.
The dime knows, the dime is the one who starts off with a good start and a willing drive to be better coming from a wealthy background with intentions to build and the forecasting to greatness. This car is the inheritor, the closest to victory with only the road itself, the driver he/she is and the maintenaince work at the heels of success this is the ride any girl we’ll marry you in. This is the dime, made out of fine silver with value placed in it according to the paper it can make up. Of course nothing is with out fault, the dime can be as expendable as the knickel or the penny and loose value to the decimal of the next online prepaid card you get.
The knickel is the preservering conformed family and friendly ideal car, the one that is sitting outside the school parking lot. With a story to tell in its mileage the option is there to take it easy and run automatic with the exception to at times require a hand on the clutch for when you pull around the sharp turns of the future. The only way to get the full potential is to make the switch to manual and control your life. He is adaptable Franklin Roosevelt he, worth a fraction of the dime living timeless through out the economy as the others shows exactly where you may be in these coming tides of time.
The penny the least, the slowest, the one that does not know, that knowledge is power. It is close to poverty, better then nothing and the single most inferioriating bass spewing drift cars, street ready to avoid collision with the authorities. With more room for error as it resides in error the penny makes the difference from being an individual willing to lose more then what he has. For their to be a winner, they must have a loser. Pennies make up the knickel and the dime, and can even reach their status through connections to even amount to something more than that of just one penny. All of the explained still hold the key component, and that is. Your intentions. Will you do it?
These are all circumstances, the money, the cars and whatever else you may see in the these words that show will you the option to take control of the situation, go manual in shifting gears to elevate collect and gain audience crowd sourcing from a penny to multi millionaire. The choice is yours, will you do it? Be novice in a fast car, or expert in a discreet automobile. The race began on the day you were born, and the road to success varies from person to people, sudan to mini-van and mind to matter. In pursuit and preserverance will you get what you seek.
“Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
Everybody has some choice. People are always blaming their circumstances for what they are. I don't believe in circumstances. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for the circumstances they want and, if they can't find them, make them.
~ Adapted from: George Bernard Shaw, Mrs. Warren's Profession
Do success and happiness depend on the choices people make rather than on factors beyond their control? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.”
Original:
Yes, the choices of an individual dictates his or her circumstance countless evidence in the generic pool of dating and flirtationship can prove this. Men and women have often chosen to be in a circumstance of happiness, sadness or even mixed In relationships, investments, hobbies. Happiness either found from partners, inner concious or outer influences is not solely dictated on the circumstances but becoming the circumstance then and there.
The Relationships of today, are seen as either monogamous or losing a best friend. The circumstance people place themselves in is not entirely chance, but the decision they have made. When dating typically couples will find a way to make the circumstances happy, but it is always followed before a mixed signal, saddening corcumstance however small it may be.
Peoples happiness are dependent on their partner and that is a circumstance itself.
In Investment rather stocks and bonds with money people are relying possibly on intuition of their guts, or an even more radical conclusion of outer forces giving hints and suggestions on what to buy, sell and trade. Regular people that are not apart of the moving Wall Street stock exchange can agree that the first thing that comes into mind is a sad business attired man who has lost his money or a rich business attired man who has made some profit. The circumstances by chance, but not happiness as happiness and its state of being is not derived from the circumstance but in ones inner self to find closure in what they are doing, Justification wether it is correct or not, is the attribution to the circumstance.
Hobbies are clearly what a person likes to do in his or her past time. Jobs can vary from individual to individual but in a general census it is what a person does to get money. These hobbies and duties we pursue are circumstances that we enter with a credible amount of happiness as usually dopemine is released in doing your favorite things.
In conclusion, from relationships to investments and hobbies or jobs the information presented shows that happiness and success are based in the peoples pursuit for it as well as keeping a positively growing mindset. Keeping optimistic and supportive of any situation and circumestance that a person is stuck in.
Formalized:
No man is bound by law, nature or truth, it is all an illusion. Success and happiness depend on the choices people make with the positive growth mindset to encompass action. A drive for success, no matter the horse power with preseverance will eventually be rewarded. The dime, the knickel and the penny with enough work will and can make a dollar. But is it fair? No, the real question to ask is if it is possible for two cars of different classes to race in a circuit unknown to them with the lower class car winning? Success is an ambitious word, something Investers want to hear, a word that will gain the clicks of social media and will cover text books, written history with immortality in your name.
The dime knows, the dime is the one who starts off with a good start and a willing drive to be better coming from a wealthy background with intentions to build and the forecasting to greatness. This car is the inheritor, the closest to victory with only the road itself, the driver he/she is and the maintenaince work at the heels of success this is the ride any girl we’ll marry you in. This is the dime, made out of fine silver with value placed in it according to the paper it can make up. Of course nothing is with out fault, the dime can be as expendable as the knickel or the penny and loose value to the decimal of the next online prepaid card you get.
The knickel is the preservering conformed family and friendly ideal car, the one that is sitting outside the school parking lot. With a story to tell in its mileage the option is there to take it easy and run automatic with the exception to at times require a hand on the clutch for when you pull around the sharp turns of the future. The only way to get the full potential is to make the switch to manual and control your life. He is adaptable Franklin Roosevelt he, worth a fraction of the dime living timeless through out the economy as the others shows exactly where you may be in these coming tides of time.
The penny the least, the slowest, the one that does not know, that knowledge is power. It is close to poverty, better then nothing and the single most inferioriating bass spewing drift cars, street ready to avoid collision with the authorities. With more room for error as it resides in error the penny makes the difference from being an individual willing to lose more then what he has. For their to be a winner, they must have a loser. Pennies make up the knickel and the dime, and can even reach their status through connections to even amount to something more than that of just one penny. All of the explained still hold the key component, and that is. Your intentions. Will you do it?
These are all circumstances, the money, the cars and whatever else you may see in the these words that show will you the option to take control of the situation, go manual in shifting gears to elevate collect and gain audience crowd sourcing from a penny to multi millionaire. The choice is yours, will you do it? Be novice in a fast car, or expert in a discreet automobile. The race began on the day you were born, and the road to success varies from person to people, sudan to mini-van and mind to matter. In pursuit and preserverance will you get what you seek.
Why did I change the things I did? This free writing I felt rushed on what was a big topic. As always the SAT Questions tend to be strenous prompts that an individual can write more than 5 pages of lengthy work on. Thus I have worked on this, with many reference to other projects I am working on and hopefully sound better than what it was originally.